(Optional) "The Green Book" Film Critical Review Revision Opportunity
Concerning your Green Book Film Critical Review, please review your
paper rubric and paper to answer the following revision questions.
Please answer specifically. (You could earn up to 1 point that could be added to your original score for these
responses).
1. What did you did you do well regarding the process and final writing of your Green Book Film Critical Review paper?
2. What is an area that you could improve upon regarding your Green Book Film Critical Review paper?
3. What writing strategy will you try to use next year when you write for any class?
4. When you write next year, what steps will you take to turn in a more
complete and polished final writing product for any writing assignment?
5. What word of writing advice would you give to your future self for next year?
posted by Greg T at Wednesday, May 05, 2021
3 Comments:
1) My first page was very good as it engaged the reader and properly summarized the novel including the main idea. I also had a solid, clear, thesis.
2) An area that could improve in my writing is my evidence. My evidence was missing two quotes which is vital in evidence. Without the quotes the evidence turns to statements and not facts. Another area I could improve on is errors. The writing did not cover the eight grammar lessons needed to be inducted into the writing.
3)A writing strategy I will like to use next year and moving forward is starting with a Introduction paragraph, followed by evidence paragraphs, and ending with a conclusion. In the writing, the introduction would contain a thesis and the evidence paragraphs would contain quotes from a reliable source.
4)I will revise my writing better. I will thoroughly read trough it and evaluate what needs to be added, changed, or removed. I will not just skim through it quickly.
5)I would tell myself don't just do it to do it. Do it to actually learn and improve your writing skills.
1) My first page was very good as it engaged the reader and properly summarized the novel including the main idea. I also had a solid, clear, thesis.
2) An area that could improve in my writing is my evidence. My evidence was missing two quotes which is vital in evidence. Without the quotes the evidence turns to statements and not facts. Another area I could improve on is errors. The writing did not cover the eight grammar lessons needed to be inducted into the writing.
3)A writing strategy I will like to use next year and moving forward is starting with a Introduction paragraph, followed by evidence paragraphs, and ending with a conclusion. In the writing, the introduction would contain a thesis and the evidence paragraphs would contain quotes from a reliable source.
4)I will revise my writing better. I will thoroughly read trough it and evaluate what needs to be added, changed, or removed. I will not just skim through it quickly.
5)I would tell myself don't just do it to do it. Do it to actually learn and improve your writing skills.
- Aden H.
1. My first page was organized and well written. I captured the audience's attention and gave a good description of the movie and the characters that were a part of it.
2. An area I could improve on is to state my interpretation better. I had a case and thoughts about it, but I wasn't specific enough so I could really work on my specificity when stating my thoughts and interpretation on something.
3. A strategy I will use next year is a more organized paragraph setup. I had my ideas set up and thoughts planned out, but I think my ideas were a little all over the place and in multiple different paragraphs instead of in one organized paragraph.
4. When I revise my writings next year, I will make sure to go back and pay attention to the flow of the writing. I tend to write well but I don't go over it enough. I need to make sure it flows and is specific in the right places.
5. I would tell myself to not procrastinate and to do it to improve and learn from the mistakes that were made.
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